is this a good story starter?
ok this is a story im thinking of writing
I never thought we would be together, but its a strange thing love is.
It started a few years ago as i was walking down that crowded school hallway. i was minding my own business, pondering
Yes, it's a bit like "Twilight", but you've captured that writing style very well, and if that's what you want to write then write it. Write what makes you happy and fuels your pen, and don't worry about what others think (unless you mean to